When Lucy woke up in hospital it took her a while to piece together where she was and why she was there. She started thinking and she realised that she was lying by someone so she asked the person who was sitting in front of her. That boy told her that she had had a terrible accident in which all her family had died in terrible circumstances.
She couldn't believe what that boy was telling her so she decided to wait until a nurse came so she could ask her about it. After some minutes a nurse came into the room so Lucy thought that was a good opportunity to find out what had happened. She asked the nurse but she said the same that she had been told by the boy, so she decided to wait for the doctor. The doctor told her the same but she didn't believe him.
Finally, the ghosts of her family appeared in the room; Lucy couldn't believe it, but in the end she realised that what she had been told was true, so she started running out of the room, along the corridors, upstairs and when she got to the top of the building; she jumped off.
Before reaching the ground the alarm suddenly rang and she woke up. Everything had been a nightmare and she had to go to school.
Not in the sense of a two-fingered salute, probably. This is the blog of a class of Basque students studying towards the Cambridge First Certificate in English.
This is a good story with nice repetition and escalation of events and a twist, but you need to proofread for typos.
ReplyDeleteYou were supposed to correct this post by 13th April, but as you still hadn't bothered by today, Jaione had to do it for you.
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