When Lucy woke up in hospital it took her a while to piece together where she was and why she was there. She tried to move, but she couldn't.
She was confused, therefore she immediately asked for her family to be present. She wanted them to explain why she was there. When they arrived she started asking lots of questions: Why? When? How? While her father was telling her the horrible story, Lucy started remembering.
She remembered that it had been a sunny Friday, and she had met her friends because of Juantxo's birthday. They met in front of the new cinema. Suddenly she realised something: they were going to drink alcohol! She refused to drink, but her best friend Andrea forced her. They went to the beach, and everybody started drinking. Lucy was dizzy and shocked , she was going to faint. Some friends were helping her, and as soon as they noticed that she had fainted, they called the ambulance.
its a very trajict story bidasoro however I like the way you have written it I have to say that the begining sounds very familiar to me you have copied from somewhere, havent you?
ReplyDeleteWould her best friend really force her or just pressurize her? Please do also remember that in real life Lucy might not have had such a narrow escape.
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