The day before, Lucy had been absolutely overjoyed with her new motorbike. She came out of the garage to have a lap of the city.
One hour later, while she was returning home, she met her best friend Mery who asked her if she could get her to her grandparents' house. They had a brilliant time together. When she had left Mery at her grandparents' house she suddenly realised that she was really late and she had to go home because she was having dinner with her family. She immediately started to ride the motorbike with too much speed and because of that she lost control and finished on the floor.
By the time she fell unconscious she had heard the ambulance siren which at last was coming to pick her up.
Because of this Lucy was in the hospital.
Good accuracy and structure, although the middle paragraph seems to long in comparison to the others. When you've finished, make sure you proofread your text -- I'm sure you would have noticed the capital H in the title, for example.
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