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Saturday, 22 March 2014

The damage that caused a natural disaster

When Lucy woke up in hospital it took her a while to piece together where she was and why she was there.

She had woken up and she saw that there were middle-age girls with white coats working, then she realized that she was in the hospital. A nurse told her that she had been at home when the terrible hurricane and the torrential rain had happened. Lucy was very injured. As the nurse was explaining what happened, Lucy remembered that she saw how the wind was breaking everything.

When Lucy saw the powerful wind breaking everything it could, she immediately started running, but the wind was so potent and so fast that she fell down and different pieces of brick fell on her body. She didn’t remember anything else because she became unconscious.

After all this happened, a lot of people appeared to help as soon as they could and they carried all the injured people to the hospital. In the end, nobody died but all the injured people were very scared.


1 comment:

  1. An engaging story with a good level of accuracy, and several higher-level phrases.

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